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Last work in progress pic~!


It's another original girl~ :la:

This was another pic that I found buried in my old drawings folder and decided to clean up and finally finish. Christmas and my mini-vacation, and the Ship comic got in the way...
'Thought I could have submitted this sooner, sorry ^^;

Anyway, enjoy another gratuitous panty shot~ :boogie:

Original girl belongs to me.

Some other original girls~ :love:
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Since the figure is the main focus of the picture, I'll critique that.

The lineart does its job well, as you have made sure to measure the line weight. The coloring is also well done, as you've set up a light source and shaded the figure accordingly. The folds on the clothes are also, well done.

It would have been better if the foot facing the viewer was tilted upwards so that the toes would face the viewer. Also, the subject matter isn't necessarily original.

However, what you have done here is done well. Hope my critique was fair. Thank you.